Quick answer
A first edition of Thinner by Stephen King (as Richard Bachman) (NAL Books, 1984) is identified by: True first is the NAL hardcover, jacketed and bylined Richard Bachman, with the copyright page stating First Printing, November, 1984 and a number line reading 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9, the printed jacket price present. The first state is the pre-revelation Bachman-bylined NAL hardcover.
Checklist — a true first has these:
- True first is the NAL hardcover, jacketed and bylined Richard Bachman, with the copyright page stating First Printing, November, 1984 and a number line reading 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9, the printed jacket price presentP-029934
- Black quarter cloth over red boards with red-stamped spineP-029935
- Published before the Bachman-equals-King identity was made public in early 1985P-029936
- The rear-flap author photo, credited to Claudia Bachman, is actually of Richard Manuel, a friend of King's literary agent Kirby McCauleyP-029937
- Publisher imprint reads NAL Books
- Not a book-club edition (see below)
| Author | Stephen King (as Richard Bachman) |
|---|---|
| Publisher | NAL Books |
| Year | 1984 |
| True first | — |
| Format | Hardcover (trade) |
| Key point | True first is the NAL hardcover, jacketed and bylined Richard Bachman, with the copyright page stating First Printing, November, 1984 and a… |
| Book-club edition exists? | Yes |
The points of issue
- True first is the NAL hardcover, jacketed and bylined Richard Bachman, with the copyright page stating First Printing, November, 1984 and a number line reading 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9, the printed jacket price present
- Black quarter cloth over red boards with red-stamped spine
- Published before the Bachman-equals-King identity was made public in early 1985
- The rear-flap author photo, credited to Claudia Bachman, is actually of Richard Manuel, a friend of King's literary agent Kirby McCauley
How NAL Books marked a first edition
- First printing: the copyright page states 'First Printing' (often as 'First Signet printing, Month Year') with no later-printing lines; later printings stack the printing history. This explicit statement is the most…
- Signet/NAL adopted a descending number line; a complete line ending in 1 indicates a first printing. From roughly the 1970s on the 'First Signet printing, Month Year' line plus the number line appear together.
Full NAL Books first-edition guide →
How to verify your copy, step by step
- Find the copyright page — the verso (back) of the title page.
- Confirm the first-edition statement — look for “First Edition,” “First Printing,” or the publisher’s equivalent wording.
- Read the number line — the lowest number is the printing. A line including 1 is a first printing (Random House deliberately ends at 2). Paste it into the decoder.
- Rule out a book-club edition — a blind-stamp on the rear board or a jacket with no printed price marks a book-club copy.
- Photograph four things — the front cover, spine, title page, and copyright page — the standard record for identification.
The dust jacket
For a collectible first edition the dust jacket matters as much as the book. Confirm the jacket is present and unclipped — the printed price should still be at the corner of the flap (a clipped corner or a price-less flap can indicate a book-club issue). First-state jackets can differ from later ones in the cover art, blurbs, or review quotations; where a specific first-state jacket point is known for this title it is noted above.
Binding & format
Where multiple bindings exist, the hardcover trade issue is usually (but not always) the precedence copy — confirm against the points above. Later printings often show cheaper cloth, thinner boards, or simplified spine stamping. A simultaneous signed or limited issue, when one exists, is a distinct state from the trade first.
Is this the true first?
The first state is the pre-revelation Bachman-bylined NAL hardcover. Thinner was the only original Bachman title first issued in hardcover; the earlier Bachman novels were paperback originals.P-029938
Telling it from reprints & book-club editions
Later printings and editions add the Stephen King writing as Richard Bachman tie-in wording and are not the first; a book club issue lacks the jacket price.P-029939
Frequently asked questions
Is my copy of Thinner a first edition?
A first edition of Thinner by Stephen King (as Richard Bachman) (NAL Books) is identified by: True first is the NAL hardcover, jacketed and bylined Richard Bachman, with the copyright page stating First Printing, November, 1984 and a number line reading 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9, the printed jacket price present.
How do I tell the first printing from a later one?
Check the copyright page. A number line whose lowest number is 1 marks a first printing (Random House ends at 2). The first state is the pre-revelation Bachman-bylined NAL hardcover.
Is the book-club edition the same as the first?
Later printings and editions add the Stephen King writing as Richard Bachman tie-in wording and are not the first; a book club issue lacks the jacket price.
I have a first edition of Thinner — what should I do?
First, document the copy: photograph the copyright page (the number line and any edition statement) and the dust-jacket flap. Confirm the points of issue above against your copy, and decode the printing with the free First Edition Checker. Clearing out books? I take them as a free donation and make sure collectible copies are identified, not discarded: free pickup in the Albuquerque metro (scheduled by route), the 24/7 drop box at 5445 Edith Blvd NE, or donor-paid mail-in from anywhere in the US. Questions? Call or text 505-250-3804.
Glossary
- First edition
- Every copy printed from the first setting of type. Collectors usually want the first edition, first printing (the true first).
- First printing / impression
- A single press run from that setting. The first printing is the earliest and most desirable; later printings are still the first edition but not the true first.
- Number line (printer's key)
- A row of numbers on the copyright page (e.g. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1). The lowest number present is the printing — a line including 1 marks a first printing (Random House deliberately ends at 2).
- Points of issue
- Specific physical details — a stated edition, a number line, a typo, a jacket state — that identify the true first printing.
- Book-club edition (BCE)
- A reprint made for a book club. Tells include a blind-stamped dot or square on the rear board and a dust jacket with no printed price. Not the true first.
- First thus
- The first appearance of a particular version (first paperback, first illustrated, first U.S. printing) — a first of that kind, not the first edition of the work.
Related first editions
- The Bachman Books: Four Early Novels
- Blaze
- Martin Dressler: The Tale of an American Dreamer — Steven Millhauser
- The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo — Stieg Larsson
- Trust Exercise — Susan Choi
- In America — Susan Sontag
- Johnny Panic and the Bible of Dreams — Sylvia Plath
- Letters Home — Sylvia Plath
How to cite this page
New Mexico Literacy Project. “Is Thinner by Stephen King (as Richard Bachman) a First Edition? Points of Issue.” NMLP First-Edition Identification Reference. Reviewed 4 July 2026. Retrieved from https://newmexicoliteracyproject.org/first-edition/thinner. Licensed CC BY 4.0 — part of the open Canonical First-Edition Points of Issue dataset (DOI 10.5281/zenodo.21184548).