Quick answer
A first edition of The Dancing Bears by W.S. Merwin (Yale University Press, 1954) is identified by: First edition, Yale University Press, New Haven, 1954, Merwin's second book of poetry (88 pages, small octavo). US Yale University Press, 1954; sole first edition, no earlier or competing printing.
Checklist — a true first has these:
- First edition, Yale University Press, New Haven, 1954, Merwin's second book of poetry (88 pages, small octavo)P-032533
- Issued in blue paper-covered boards with a red illustration to the front and titling in white; in the pictorial dust jacket, which carries the printed price on the front flap (present on unclipped copies)P-032534
- Identified as the first by the 1954 Yale imprint with no later-printing statement on the copyright pageP-032535
- Publisher imprint reads Yale University Press
- Not a book-club edition (see below)
| Author | W.S. Merwin |
|---|---|
| Publisher | Yale University Press |
| Year | 1954 |
| True first | US edition |
| Format | Hardcover (trade) |
| Key point | First edition, Yale University Press, New Haven, 1954, Merwin's second book of poetry (88 pages, small octavo) |
| Book-club edition exists? | No |
The points of issue
- First edition, Yale University Press, New Haven, 1954, Merwin's second book of poetry (88 pages, small octavo)
- Issued in blue paper-covered boards with a red illustration to the front and titling in white; in the pictorial dust jacket, which carries the printed price on the front flap (present on unclipped copies)
- Identified as the first by the 1954 Yale imprint with no later-printing statement on the copyright page
How Yale University Press marked a first edition
- Older/standard convention: the copyright page of a REPRINT states the date of first publication and lists subsequent printings/editions; a copy whose copyright page carries only the copyright line (no reprint or…
- Revised editions always state the date of the original edition plus the revision — so any 'Second edition'/'Revised edition'/'Reprinted' language rules out a first printing of the first edition.
Full Yale University Press first-edition guide →
How to verify your copy, step by step
- Find the copyright page — the verso (back) of the title page.
- Confirm the first-edition statement — look for “First Edition,” “First Printing,” or the publisher’s equivalent wording.
- Check for a number line or dated printing — the lowest number present is the printing; a dated first printing with no later printings listed is the tell.
- Verify this is the US true first — not a later-market or reprint edition.
- Rule out a book-club edition — a blind-stamp on the rear board or a jacket with no printed price marks a book-club copy.
- Photograph four things — the front cover, spine, title page, and copyright page — the standard record for identification.
The dust jacket
For a collectible first edition the dust jacket matters as much as the book. Confirm the jacket is present and unclipped — the printed price should still be at the corner of the flap (a clipped corner or a price-less flap can indicate a book-club issue). First-state jackets can differ from later ones in the cover art, blurbs, or review quotations; where a specific first-state jacket point is known for this title it is noted above.
Binding & format
Where multiple bindings exist, the hardcover trade issue is usually (but not always) the precedence copy — confirm against the points above. Later printings often show cheaper cloth, thinner boards, or simplified spine stamping. A simultaneous signed or limited issue, when one exists, is a distinct state from the trade first.
Is this the true first?
US Yale University Press, 1954; sole first edition, no earlier or competing printing. Note this title was not itself a Yale Series of Younger Poets selection (that was his 1952 debut A Mask for Janus), though it was likewise published by Yale.P-032536
Telling it from reprints & book-club editions
No book club edition.P-032537
Frequently asked questions
Is my copy of The Dancing Bears a first edition?
A first edition of The Dancing Bears by W.S. Merwin (Yale University Press) is identified by: First edition, Yale University Press, New Haven, 1954, Merwin's second book of poetry (88 pages, small octavo).
How do I tell the first printing from a later one?
Check the copyright page. A stated first edition, a number line ending in 1, or a dated first printing with no later printings listed is the key. US Yale University Press, 1954; sole first edition, no earlier or competing printing.
Is the book-club edition the same as the first?
No book club edition.
I have a first edition of The Dancing Bears — what should I do?
First, document the copy: photograph the copyright page (the number line and any edition statement) and the dust-jacket flap. Confirm the points of issue above against your copy, and decode the printing with the free First Edition Checker. Clearing out books? I take them as a free donation and make sure collectible copies are identified, not discarded: free pickup in the Albuquerque metro (scheduled by route), the 24/7 drop box at 5445 Edith Blvd NE, or donor-paid mail-in from anywhere in the US. Questions? Call or text 505-250-3804.
Glossary
- First edition
- Every copy printed from the first setting of type. Collectors usually want the first edition, first printing (the true first).
- First printing / impression
- A single press run from that setting. The first printing is the earliest and most desirable; later printings are still the first edition but not the true first.
- Number line (printer's key)
- A row of numbers on the copyright page (e.g. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1). The lowest number present is the printing — a line including 1 marks a first printing (Random House deliberately ends at 2).
- Points of issue
- Specific physical details — a stated edition, a number line, a typo, a jacket state — that identify the true first printing.
- Book-club edition (BCE)
- A reprint made for a book club. Tells include a blind-stamped dot or square on the rear board and a dust jacket with no printed price. Not the true first.
- First thus
- The first appearance of a particular version (first paperback, first illustrated, first U.S. printing) — a first of that kind, not the first edition of the work.
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How to cite this page
New Mexico Literacy Project. “Is The Dancing Bears by W.S. Merwin a First Edition? Points of Issue.” NMLP First-Edition Identification Reference. Reviewed 4 July 2026. Retrieved from https://newmexicoliteracyproject.org/first-edition/the-dancing-bears. Licensed CC BY 4.0 — part of the open Canonical First-Edition Points of Issue dataset (DOI 10.5281/zenodo.21184548).